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大多数雅思考生有一个误区,认为只要能使用很高级的英文单词就可以拿到7分以上,但一个句型的语法多样性和准确性,才是雅思写作的评分标准之一,为了帮助考鸭们突破句型语法的难关,小编就带大家一起来解析一下雅思写作的模范句型。
案例分析
初级阶段:我们可以很容易的说:声sound,信息出来,但是我们不明白他的寓意。
进级阶段:学会了组词:声音 sound of voice,随后用形容词来修饰,轰隆降的声音 noisy sound of voice,其所表达的意识就更加鲜明了。
高级阶段:可以找到想要描述的对象,例如:火车轰隆隆的声音 the noisy sound oftrain,大多数基础好的同学都能做出完整的句子如下。
I heard the noisy sound of the train.这个句子很好,过去式做到了,主谓宾都有,在雅思口语考试中我们完全可以轻松拿到6分。
但是想要获得雅思7分,那么下面的句子才是大家最终奋斗的目标:
尽管我听到火车轰隆隆的声音从我耳边响过,我仍旧集中精力看书,所以我觉得自己很专注。
Although I heard the noisy sound of the train passing by my ears,still l could focus on reading,that's why I think I was really concentrated.
句中although……, still……的从句首先是一个亮点,体现了考生的思维模式,已经到了主从句的复杂句型。
heard, could,was 都体现了考生的灵活的过去式
passing by 动词ing表伴随
that’s why 表结果的从句
was concentrated 灵活的被动语态
这样的句子就是7分,甚至7.5 到8分,一句话利用了娴熟的语法技能把场景、寓意、让步转折全部表现到位,值得学习借鉴。
经典句型介绍—被字句、把字句下面是一些最经典、常用的被动语态表示说话者感觉,我们来一起体会一下!
I was really amazed by….我被…震撼了。
I was really amazed by the Forbidden city in Beijing.
I was really amazed by the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai.
I was impressed by……我对…印象深刻。
I was impressed by the West Lake in HangZhou.
I was impres ssed by his English.
I felt adj./done 感到…
I felt relaxed & refreshed .
I feel pressured .
I feel content.
I feel satisfactory .
1.我所想说的是…… The thing I want to say is that…
我所想说的是现代人更加喜欢在假日旅游而不是呆在家里
The thing I want to say is that modern-day people are much keener on travelling rather than staying at home during holidays.
2.我上次所看到的主要是……The thing I saw last time was mainly that…
我上次所看到的主要是全国的游客都井然有序的排队参观每一个馆在 2010 世博会上。
The thing I saw last time was mainly that tourists nationwide all queue up for each pavilion in great order inside the 2010 World Expo Park.
3.我所珍惜的自由是……The freedom that I cherish is that.
我所珍惜的自由是我自己一个人主,独立安排自己的学习和休闲,不再和父母及他们的唠叨在一起了。
The freedom that I cherish is that I now live on myown,independently managing my study & leisure time, not living with my parents & their nagging any more.
4.我所要提一提的是……The point that I want to say is that…
我所要提一提的是现在的生活水平和消费层次已经大大好于20年前了。
The point that I want to say is that the living standard & the consumption level are much better and higher than those two 20 years ago.
5.所进入我脑海的第一点是……The first thing that sprang into my mind is that…
所进入我脑海的而第一点是古建筑可以让访问它的人鲜明的学到历史而不是从书本上。
The first thing that sprang into my mind is that visitors to those historic buildings can learn history in a vivid way rather than from a book.
6.之所以……是因为……The reason why…is because…
之所以我想成为一名英国大学的教师是因为我想在西方国家传播中国的文化。
The reason why I want to become a professor in a university in UK is because I hope to deliver Chinese culture in western countries.
之所以我们中国学生要学好英文是因为它可以我们能够更多的机会和更广阔的发展平台。
The reason why we Chinese students have to learn English well is that it can provide us with more opportunities & wider stage for development.
7.由于这样一个事实……This is due to the fact that….
现代人应该经常去健身房,这是因为运动可以拉升身体,肌肉,韧带;对于久坐的办公室工作阶层,运动对他们的脊椎也是很好的
Modern-day people should go to the gym regularly. This is due to the fact that exercise can stretch our bodies, muscles and ligaments, for those who sit for too long, sports can really do good to their spines.
8.这是因为……It is because…
我们要多吃蔬菜和水果,这是因为他们富含维他命和纤维对我们的消化和新陈代谢系统是很好的。
We can try to eat more vegetables and fruits, it is because they are full of vitamin & fiber, helping our digestion & metabolism system.
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